Seraph Chapter 8

I've just finished the first edit revisions of chapter 8, and have sent it back to K, my wonderful editor. This chapter, out of all so far, has caused major grief. It takes place in one setting and continuity is a nightmare. The characters are either standing or sitting, and obviously they can't 'sit down' if they already are sitting down - and visa versa. Simple, you'd think. But no. Finally it's done and sent away to be red-penned.